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目前中学生学习任务重,压力大,而丰富多彩的业余生活,有利于开拓视野,调节身心,提高学习效率。请以“My Spare Time”为题,写一篇作文谈谈你的业余生活,如看书、看电视、-八年级英语

[db:作者]  2019-11-13 00:00:00  互联网

题文

目前中学生学习任务重,压力大,而丰富多彩的业余生活,有利于开拓视野,调节身心,提高学习效率。请以“My Spare Time”为题,写一篇作文谈谈你的业余生活,如看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、做家务等。请将答案填写在答题卡的相应位置。
写作要求:
1.包含提示所给要点,语言流畅,意思连贯,不必逐字逐句翻译,可以适当发挥拓展;
2.词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I ’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful. _______________________________________________________________________
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题型:写作题  难度:中档

答案


My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I ’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful. After school I usually play sports. I like basketball and football very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me to open up my eyes to the outside world. On weekends, I often help my parents with the housework. I sweep the floor, wash the clothes and learn to cook. I enjoy myself in my spare time.


试题分析:此题是命题式作文,要求根据提示及所给材料以My Spare Time为题写一篇英语作文,主要考查写作能力,也是对英语综合知识运用的考查,这就要求仔细分析所给提示,不要漏掉提示要点,可适当发挥,写出语言流畅,意思连贯的文章。
【亮点说明】这篇文章语言连贯,简洁明了。在文章中使用不少复合句和固定短语,为文章增色不少,同时也体现出作者的写作功底。例如:Though I ’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.(虽然我很忙,但我的业余时间仍然是丰富多彩);They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school.(它们给我们很多在学校学不到的知识);I find it’s a good way to relax myself.(我发现这是自我放松的一个好方式);以及be busy with,help sb. with/(to) do sth.等。

据专家权威分析,试题“目前中学生学习任务重,压力大,而丰富多彩的业余生活,有利于开..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下:

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  • 提纲作文注意:
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    2. 提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,
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    3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。



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