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上周日,Mary度过了忙碌的一天。请根据下表中Mary周日的行程,写一写Mary在忙的时候,你在做什么?(词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数)9:00 am10:00 am2:00 – 3:00 pm4:0-八年级英语

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上周日,Mary度过了忙碌的一天。请根据下表中Mary周日的行程,写一写Mary在忙的时候,你在做什么?(词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数)
9:00 am
10:00 am
2:00 – 3:00 pm
4:00 pm
7:00 pm
read English
do math homework
have a piano lesson
visit friends
help mom cook dinner
 
At 9:00 , While Mary was reading English , I was listening to the English news on TV .
 
 
 
 

题型:写作题  难度:中档

答案


At 9:00 , While Mary was reading English , I was listening to the English news on TV "At 10,while Mary was doing her math homework, I was listening to music. At 2:00 in the afternoon, while Mary was having a piano lesson, I was visiting my grandmother. We went to the farm and fed the chickens. At 4:00 in the afternoon , while Mary was visiting her friends , I was going fishing by the river. It was relaxing. At 7:00 in the afternoon, while Mary was helping her mom cook dinner, I was watching the stars in the sky ,They were beautiful.


试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的时态,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。.如We went to the farm and fed the chickens..等。They were beautiful.等,使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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据专家权威分析,试题“上周日,Mary度过了忙碌的一天。请根据下表中Mary周日的行程,写..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下:

提纲作文

考点名称:提纲作文

  • 提纲作文:
    即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

  • 提纲作文注意:
    1. 仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。
    2. 提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,
       按照一定逻辑关系来写。
    3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。



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