假如你是李华,寒假即将到来,你打算度过一个怎么样的假期呢?请你根据提示,以“A Meaningful Vacation (一个有意义的假期)”为题,写一篇小短文。提示:1. 学习方面:What wil-八年级英语
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假如你是李华,寒假即将到来,你打算度过一个怎么样的假期呢?请你根据提示,以“A Meaningful Vacation (一个有意义的假期)”为题,写一篇小短文。 提示:1. 学习方面:What will you do about study? 2. 健康方面:What about your health? Will you exercise? 3. 生活方面:What will you help do at home? 要求:1. 必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名及相关信息; 3. 字数:60~80 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 A Meaningful Vacation The winter vacation is coming soon. _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ |
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A Meaningful Vacation The winter vacation is coming soon. We’ll have a one-month holiday. After learning at school for a long term, I’m going to do something during the vacation. To have a meaningful vacation, I’m going to do the following things: First, I will finish doing my homework on time and preview the new lessons. As a student, I think study should come first. Second, I will do some sports, such as skating, playing football and so on. If I want to study well, I must have a healthy body. Third, I am going to help at home. It’s not easy for my parents to look after me, so I am going to help them do some housework, like cleaning the floor, doing the dishes and so on. I believe I will have a meaningful vacation. |
试题分析:这篇短文是一篇命题作文,题目为a meaningful vacation ,一个有意义的假期,在这篇短文中要表达一下自己假期的安排,文章主要包括三个方面,即学习方面、健康方面和生活方面,要用自己的话把这三方面的安排表达清楚,不能遗漏一条。通过分析可知,这篇短文应主要使用第一人称,一般现在时和一般将来时来表达。同时可以有适当的发挥,以使文章内容充实。表达时还要注意使用正确的连接词,使文章表达连贯、流畅。 【亮点说明】这篇范文书写规范,内容完整,层次分明。短文分成了三段,第一段先点明了主题,要放假了,要过一个有意义的假期;第二段是中心段,具体表达了假期的安排,有first、 second 、third将三方面的内容表达出来;第三段是一个总结段,再次点明主题,即要过一个有意义的假期。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语,如After learning at school for a long term, I’m going to do something during the vacation、I will finish doing my homework on time and preview the new lessons、I will do some sports, such as skating,、It’s not easy for my parents to look after me, so I am going to help them do some housework, like cleaning the floor, doing the dishes and so on playing football and so on等。 |
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