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假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill来信询问你家乡的雾霾天气情况如何。请你根据以下要点写一封电子邮件，谈谈目前的情况和你的做法。内容要点如下： 1．自去年冬天以来，无锡已发生多次雾霾天气。雾霾对我们的日常生活已造成很大危害。 2．由于雾霾交通事故时有发生，许多人因为吸入有毒的空气而生病。 3．人们已认识到保护环境的重要性，政府正采取措施预防雾霾天气的发生。 4．作为一名中学生，你将……。 参考词汇：雾霾：smog 雾霾天气 hazy weather  有毒的poisonous 注意：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 第4要点内容须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Bill, I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog. _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua

题型：写作题  难度：偏易

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Dear Bill, I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog. Since last winter, the smog has happened many times in Wuxi. It has done great harm to our daily life. Traffic accidents often happen because of the smog. Many people get sick because they breathe in poisonous air. People have realized the importance of protecting the environment. The government is taking actions to prevent hazy weather happening. As a middle school student, I will plant more trees and I won’t throw the waste anywhere. I will go to school by bike or on foot. (可参考的发挥要点I will ask my parents not to drive to work. I will ask more people to protect the environment as possible as they can.) Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是现在完成时态和一般将来时，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: done great harm to our daily life、because of the smog 、taking actions to prevent hazy weather happening、as possible as they can等等。

据专家权威分析，试题“假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill来信询问你家乡的雾霾天气情况如..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。