题文

在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。 要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于80词； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算     I am not a child any more

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答案

I am not a child any more I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.     It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”      It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本篇短文涉及了过去和现在的改变，从各个方面能感受到作者不再是一个孩子了，已经长大了可以为父母做点事情了。文中用到了一般过去式。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，不仅介绍了作者自己和小时候的变化，还从实际行动中表明自己不再是一个孩子了，文中用到了一些固定句型The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others；It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.这些句子给文章增色不少。

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