题文

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A difficult choice I had to make.”（以“一个艰难的选择”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） Using the following points as a reference.（以下问题供参考） 1. Have you ever had a difficult choice to make? 2. What made it so difficult for you? 3. What was your final decision? 4. Do you think it is a right decision?

题型：写作题  难度：偏难

答案

Our lives are the sum of all our choices. The decisions we make today, may very well play a critical role in our future tomorrow. When I was thirteen, my mother always wanted me a girl who was good at school work. However, I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn’t like study at all, which was not allowed by her. As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby. Knowledge is power, and I think the choice I’ve made must be wise one.

试题分析：本篇作文从题目的提示中可以看出整篇文章应该以记叙文为主，时态上要注意选取过去时，最后自我总结部分进行议论，用一般现在时即可。本文在写作时根据提示进行论述，思路会比较清晰。根据“选择是什么”—“难以选择的原因”+“选择过后的自我总结”。此类记叙文在本次二模和三模的各区模考中比较常见，例如“A problem I have solved”要加强对于学生行文时态转换的注意。 【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

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